Conrad Rice

It's got promise, but you're going to need to develop it a bit more. - A boy from the Wild West is thrown into a universe parallel to his own, ...

Sounds like a shy, quiet girl who dreams of doing more with her life. Scranton Pheeney

7/10. Almost there, but it just doesn't feel quite right. When the killing time comes, a hard man never looks at his watch.

And where shall death find thee, oh high plains drifter, when at last a bullet finds itself in your back? Killed by a coward- not a man fit to fight, ...

Hi there, kawriter. I'm Conrad. The first thing that I notice with this is that you do pretty good with description. This piece is very good with description and I ...

Looking pretty good there.

Deep (Thank you! :P )

Hill

Shrug my shoulders and go out on a hike for my birthday, when the day came. Lack of money doesn't mean you can't celebrate your birthday in your own way. ...

Hi there, Pacific_Sky14. I'm Conrad. So, when I stumbled upon this, I have to say that I found myself pleasantly surprised. I love how this poem tells a pretty interesting ...

Hi there Eimear. I'm Conrad. So, I really kind of like this poem, mostly because I am finding myself in the same position as the speaker in university. As far ...

Hi Sarah. I'm Conrad. So, this poem seems a bit muddled to me. What I would like to know, really, is who the speaker is referring to when they say, ...

Hi there Sarah. I'm Conrad. I have to say that the repetitive way you start your first seven lines or so doesn't do anything for me. It just kind of ...

I'm giving this thread some Babylon 5 love. Those Shadow ships were pretty cool.

"The Saints Are Coming"- Green Day and U2